My Heart I Give To You (Collab)

by Italian Stallion   Feb 2, 2007


It took just one glance
For me to realize
To take a chance
Without Capsizing

You swept me off my feet
At my favorite spot
A perfect place to meet
I had to take a shot

So here I am today
With the one I love
Hoping she won\'t stray
But instead belove

I will let her know
How much I care
I won't let her go
And I'll always be there

Hugs, kisses and laughter too
Are just a few
Of what I like of you
And upon you now lays your next clue

A sound of something beating
My heart I give to you
Upon our first time meeting
I knew something was true

© Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion And Darien

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Collaboration with Darien

Darien: http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=132944
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  • 16 years ago

    by CalebxXxPoet With A PurposexXx

    This is also an amazing piece i really love the way that it goes 5/5 Caleb H

  • 16 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Awww... another well penned love story. If only we could all be lucky enough to enjoy this love that you both have spoken about.

    ~~Sher

  • 16 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    That was awesome.
    I loved how you wrote that...
    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by cicek

    Very cute=]

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I don't like rhyming too much, it lacks originality, I think if you want to rhyme than be unique.
    Nice poem, it is interesting, but it did not kept my attention, sorry just my opinion, but I think that it could be more intense on some parts.

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