"Then hell know its real"

I'm sure you don't mean that. I think you mean "He'll" or "He will". Otherwise, this is very strange, as it's quite twee and bland apart from the line about having a crush. That certainly adds a different perspective, because if the crush is external to the course of the poem you've put something quite unique in. If not... :-(

Really well written and it flows
xD

Very nice.