Incredible . It used a lot of common vocabulary and some common rhymes used on this site, but I loved your word choice . Like :

This love, his love... could it be

Absolute,
Or just lechery?
`Gorgeous, darling .
Wonderfully written . It's simple, yet so big .

..__MiNDYY

Nice style, simple and sweet.
Very deep, very powerful.

Another fine written piece, you express a lot in this beautiful poem, keep up the good work.

This love, his love... could it be
^^ Great line.

Different style short and to the point check out some of my featured poems . i just got on from being gone for awhile i have wrot like four poems in the past 24hr but i loved your poem 5/5