A terrible mistake

by disturbed one   Feb 2, 2007


Oh how beautiful she was,
All up in ribbons and curls,
Her beauty was overwhelming,
With all of her diamonds and pearls,

She fell in a love so untrue,
The stories hard to tell,
I might make it sound worse,
But that girl went through hell,

At first she was blinded by money,
And spoiled by riches,
But she couldnt see,
He was full of glitches,

Then the other girls came along,
She was left in the wake,
To pick up the pieces,
Of one terrible mistake

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  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Wow, I really like this one! It was short and simple but you can just see what you meant by it... loved it! Thanks for all those comments (melt... haha now it makes sense!)

    Take Care!
    Ciao

  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Yes i do have to comment everything lol...and i dont care if u hate it...im gonna keep doin it lmao =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessie

    Aww this is an awesome poem. And I'm not even gonna bother asking what or who it's about cause you wont tell me, but sweet poem n e ways.

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