I am Broken

by Sapphire   Feb 2, 2007


I am broken
I am numb
I smile yet I am blank
I feel nothing
It's a front
Can't you see?
Or maybe I'm just too good at hiding
At showing nothing
Of what's really going on
Is that it?
I want you to try
I want you to try
to get to me
And break the walls
Around my soul
I'm begging
I want to feel again
I don't want to feel
Nothing.....
Please fix me....
If you love me
Because I am
Broken......

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  • 15 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    You are a really good poet. This poem is very emotional and the word choice is perfect.
    For
    "Or maybe I'm just to good at hiding"
    the 'to' should be 'too'
    Otherwise you're good.
    Yet another 5/5
    <3
    I'm really suprised no one else has commented.