Comments : I am Broken

  • 15 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    You are a really good poet. This poem is very emotional and the word choice is perfect.
    For
    "Or maybe I'm just to good at hiding"
    the 'to' should be 'too'
    Otherwise you're good.
    Yet another 5/5
    <3
    I'm really suprised no one else has commented.