Awww.. this is soo cute.. it has a nice flow and strong emotions.. a little cliche.. but still a great write..

you may be to put a comma in the last stanza
"You are the woman of my dreams I would not trade you for anything
I can't live without you, you are my everything"

Awwwwww........... thatsh sho shweet........... oh how cheesyyyy.....
googd use of words though....