Awww that poem was so lovely i liked it,
great flow too.

"I woke up drenched,
I smelled of salt,
It was just a dream,
But her voice was not."

great ending,
as always it was great 5/5
~*~Jen~*~

I loved it! And hey write back to me I'm waiting!!!! lol I'll talk to you later...buh-bye!

Wow this was really good definitely 5/5 keep it up
x!x

Well so far two ppl above have voted 5 but you only have one. so how does that work? one of them didn't vote.

i will. i always do. and i will vote 5! cause its great! i could easily relate.

david

I really liked your poem and thanks for commenting me....also sorry that i put 4/5 but i rarely give 5/5 sorry again

That was an amazing poem. I loved the message through it, but feel sad that you feel this way. I know i say it all the time but your strength amazes me and you just have to keep holding on. Take care.

Kelly
xx

Aww that such a sad but beautiful at the end, I'm sorry I haven't commented back on your poems, I can't get into the love section unless I'm at school. But anyways this was another great poem.

Thank you so much for the comment.
They are always appreciated.
I wrote a new poem..it's called Could You Hear Me {i think haha} and i have not yet gotten a comment so if you want to tell me how im doing thatd be great. Anyway...this poem is very very good. It is sad and theres so much emotion and then the end is kind of mysterious. Very Very good.

OKay is it that you don't check your e-mail a lot...or *sniff* you just don't wanna talk to me??..*Sniff* lol I'll talk to you later okay? buh-bye!

Hey this was so sad i just adored the description you used in this poem so very very sad
great job 5/5
kiara

Nice poem i loved the wording it was really good your an excellent poet keep it up love always kaila

AWESOME, AMAZING, TERIFECT!!!!
i hav never seen anything soooo deep. this poem grabed me. it got me full atition. keep writing:)

As always sweets, your poems are right from the heart and i can't help but keep wishing that one day all the hurt will be lifted from you.
5/5
*Gem*

Wow this is such a great poem, it seems really honest and i love the descriptions and the way it tells a story, 5/5
- polly