Omg i totally feel your painn..
excellent keep it up=)

Love the poems there amazing

Sometimes, I feel exactly the same way. It's nice to know that even if I can't, someone can voice it.
This is great!

5/5!

I can really relate to this poem.

"she wants to someone
to understand"

I think you meant "She wants someone to understand"

Besides that one little mistake I really liked it. You did a good job. Keep it up!

Very good! keep it up

Very emotive poem, short and simple with a big meaning, well done. 5/5 *Gem*

P.S. I always comment back when people comment me, when people start begging for comments, i ususally ignore them and just don't. I'll make an exception for you but just remember that k? =) Nice poem again.

Brake should be break. short sweet and to the point. Honestly you have agood write here, but it could have used a little more emtion. the word choice was pretty good so was the vocab, the flow was good too. 4/5

Twas pretty good! You have potential.
My suggestion for this piece in particular is this:

You need some sort of closing... Something at the end that really summarizes it a bit. Or that leaves the reader thinking, 'wow, I get that, and that was amazing...' you know what I mean?

I would offer some good ones if I could think of any, but, in my experience, they have to come from the heart, and they're what really makes the poem good.
You could use a little more emotion, too.

But besides that, I think this is really a wonderful poem! You're definitely on the right path! Keep it up!

I really liked it because you put it together well for such a short peice. usually i like rhymes and such but you put this together very well. 5/5

I lioked this poem even though it was a little short. It was still a nice poem. 5/5

Ur poem was really awesome and what attracted me the most is that u wrote it in a short way but at the same time it showed ur pain...keep it up:)

Well i guess even short poems and get to the point, lol it was really good and got to the point 5/5