"As each day pasted." (It should be past)

"It's been a long time since I last talked to you.
How could you just leave me,
Without even saying goodbye?
I trusted you, I cared about you,
But everything you told me was all lies.
I should have known this wouldn't last,
Nothing ever does."

Wow...Thats true. That happened to me. Once again, Great poem!! It all was really good!!! I loved all of your poems!
5/5
~Shae

Sweet poem, very effective ending when the emotions became stronger. The topic is good but the content and the word choice is on the weaker side. Keep it up

Good poem, but hey seeing as how it is an old one i hope all is better now. It's better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all, i have come to understand what the actually meens over the years. I hope you do too.

Ahh...first loves. It sucks a lot when they're over but I think you can learn something from them. Another good poem. Good work.

That was actually pretty good, even though you have improved a bunch.

I realy like your poem dear God bless you. by the way now wht happnd did u talk to her... say her tht you love her more than yesterday

Sad but i can relate to it and i'm sure a lot of other people can too.