Gee this has a lot of emotion! the way you write is so different but so very exciting to read your poems. ill read the other one.

5/5 David

You know, its sooo nice to read poems like yours every once in a while. I honestly, (and I'm not just saying this, all though sometimes I do) think this is a great work. You write with words the way artists paint with brushes, both end up in a picture. Seriously amazing.

Woah dark sad, and awesome!

"Large mounds of previous friends--
seen as nothing but sad fate,
No love, no heart for memories,
or deathly faces await" that was my favorite part, how you write flows so well

great job 5/5
omen

Wow this is really good. it flowed soo nicely together. probably one of the best poems i read by you. i enjoyed reading it. keep writing! 5/5

~Kristina

Wow.. this poem is soo great! the flow is flawless and the rhymes are all wonderful.. not one seems forced even the slightest bit.. your choice of words really bring this poem to life.. spectacular write

WOW great job lots of emotion

I really liked this. The subject is very touching, and I liked the originality. I'm really impressed with how flawless your rhyming is and how your language (i.e. the words you chose) fit in perfectly with the rhythm and the idea. In fact I'm almost jealous lol. nice work