That was strong,that was great!

This fukin sucked

Ignore the above, it didn't suck at all.
I could sense the anger behind the words, and I enjoyed all of it muchly.
I thought the flow was perfect.

Ooo i liked this! very nice. just one little comment thingy lol
''Love is pain
love is joy
fuc-k the love
it destroys'' --on the last line -it destroys cahnge it to it destroys all or somethihng itll rhyme better and flow a lil easier..just a sugestion other wise great wonderful fantastic!! Keep it up!! 5/5 =D

--Mel

Wow that was great....= )