I`d like to know,is it easy to see,all these deep lacerations inside of me?
Is it easily noticed,the pain and the sorrows,
That are fused alongside my todays and tomorrows?
Theres a steady flow of dismay,pouring through the wounds of my past,
The remnant of my yesterday
Now I`m bleeding uncontrollably,and it only stops when your next to me.
You are the one in my dreams,when they tear me open at the seams,
Your right there putting me together as you comfort all my screams.
When I am crippled your my crutch,you are my soul`s touch.
You are the truth that floods my delusional state,
The one and only,who frees me from my hate.
You are a godsend,the one I will guard and defend,my lifelong friend,
Taking a stand until the end.
And when I look into your eyes,I am under a trance,
and I begin to whisper....
how far do you want me to go,
How long do you want me to cry, out for you?
How hard do you want me to fall, for you?
Cause this may be my last chance,to tell her how I feel,
To tell her that I need her,
To let you know that I`m your bleeder.
WOW O.O 5/5
This is the first one of yours I've read and... WOW... I loved it ^.^ It was fantastic =)
I'm really going to enjoy reading the rest of yours =D
Oh and thank you for the great comment =) I always love it when people tell me what they think of my work ^.^
***Rhea***