Comments : Young Girl

  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless Watermelon

    Certainly the most intriguing write i've come across in quite some time, and this time an off-beat one was good, keep em comin

  • 16 years ago

    by pozinthenoise

    Thanks for the comment...really appreciate it!

  • 16 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    This poem is flipping awesome` your so creative. love your choice of words;
    - Close your eyes for a while,
    Then think of a reason to smile…
    - Don’t give a shelter for unspoken anger
    - Stay strong; face your train of fears etc.
    C R E A T I V E :)

  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    This is a very powerful write...5/5