I like this. I read it first cause the title( a band I like called the Fray does a song called She Is, which I really like). It needs a bit tightening up (some of the punctuation/spelling, a bit more polish on the flow language-wise) but it is the words, meaning and emotion that make this piece strong. It is definitely heartfelt and very honestly conveyed. I know where you're coming from-I'm sure quite a few readers will relate. Good piece!

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka