by Catastrophic Beauty Feb 3, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
goodbye
Lying here with tears streaming from my eyes |
You put this feeling to words perfectly. The rhythem flowed out of my mouth as I read it aloud, fantastic. 5/5! |
by KaKaSHi
C'est la vie (thats life) |
"I turn to the window and see the rain stop |
Well written very heart felt keep writing |
So sweet. There was love in that poem. Great job! (Yes, finally some new poems! hehe) |