I just wish I could,,*

by Catastrophic Beauty   Feb 3, 2007


Lying here with tears streaming from my eyes
Counting the moments to our final goodbyes
I lay my hand on my chest and feel my heart
I feel it breaking to pieces while falling apart

I turn to the window and see the rain stop
And dry my reddened eyes as my tears drop
I don't want us be blown away just like dust
Keeping this friendship strong is an utter must

How could you be moving an ocean away
You don't know how much I want you stay
If I could keep you here, you know I would
But there's no way I can and I wish I could
...I just wish I could

ALL C0MMENTS WiLL BE RETURNED♥

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  • 17 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    You put this feeling to words perfectly. The rhythem flowed out of my mouth as I read it aloud, fantastic. 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by KaKaSHi

    C'est la vie (thats life)
    this poem apparently came straight from the heart to the tip of ur pen
    i can relate the the whole theme
    loved the last stanza...=)

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    "I turn to the window and see the rain stop
    And dry my reddened eyes as my tears drop
    I don't want us be blown away just like dust
    Keeping this friendship strong is an utter must"

    I loved this part the most.
    Excellent write.

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Well written very heart felt keep writing

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    So sweet. There was love in that poem. Great job! (Yes, finally some new poems! hehe)
    xoxo

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