Comments : 4th

  • 17 years ago

    by jack

    Your writtng has me hooked i loved this one BOOM. it was good.
    5/5 check my poems out.

  • 17 years ago

    by Animus

    Now that's the kind of poem I like to to read. The way you expressed the feelings.
    The happiness of that night and the togetherness, it's all very sweet.
    I really liked the whole *BOOM* part. lol!!
    Good job
    -Animus