Love the poem...I think u hav a talent
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OMG!! i soooooooooo love this poem.. it's one of the best i have read so far!! this is wut i feel like bout my bf n shit.. ur awesome writer!

I like how you just tell it how it is and speak from your heart!! keep it up!! (thanks for the comment!!) God bless!

Wow...this poem is very touching. I can't really relate to it well...but i can feel your emotion. well 5/5 keep it up

Omg that was just beautiful
"a surprise,
something Ive never felt before
you made my heart soar"
^my fav line^
thanx for commenting
and omg i love your writing also!
-liz-
=]

Lovely poem, great concepts and I do like the title (something people tend to neglect to comment on :p) - it was the title which drew me to the poem. Which is, I say it again, a brilliant concept.

Very nice poem. i really enjoyed readin the rhymings. great job! keep it up. 5/5

Another great poem by you 5/5. You have such great talent. I love the poem its wow so many people can relate to it. any ways comment back. && can you comment on my new poem untilted..
**Thanks Kelsey**

Then you kissed me on my lips
and my leg began to dip
the chemistry between us was amazing
it was what I had been craving
forever

i can relate to this part of the poem pperfectly!! this is so true and it is exactly how a girl sees it!

xoxo becca

I am 13 and in 8th grade. wil is 15 but his mom dropped us off at this strip mall so we walked around for about to 2 hours. what grade are you in?

wil..he is tall, big blue eye, skinny..w/ abs (woohoo), brown hair (kinda long/skater cut), almost always wears a hat, he had never kissed a girl til he met me (YaY...i'm gonna teach him a thing or two..haha)...thats about it i guess...descride what shane looks like...

xoxo becca

Oh yeah...what does btw stand for?

Ooooo ok! that helps...lol

awe..he sounds good looking. do u play any sports?

Haha...awesome! i wish that i could dance...some of my friends do..but i have NO rhythm...lol. i play volley ball and soccer. i focus a lot of my attention on volleyball cuz i have been playing it longer. one day soon i am going to write a volleyball poem...but i'm not in a writing poetry mood right now. lol

Ok...well...i have dark brown hair but right now it is dyed light brown. i may seem like a city girl but deep down i love to be out in the county. my parents are divorse and my mom is now remarried. i live with my mom and my step-dad..though secretly i want to go live with my real dad. poetry is my way of escaping reality! lol. i love music....i am always listening to it. i am christian...are you? if not then what religion do u have?

thats just a little bit about me i will tell u more later! tell me about you now...

xoxo becca

Haha...awesome! well i can't drive (or atleast not legaly!) and well i have to go for right now but i will get back on in a little while...comment me back!!!!

Haha...that is awesome! you r lucky that you get to see him all the time! we see each other once a week but i hope that since his mom has met me that she will let us hang out more often! haha.

xoxo becca

I am going to see him at church!!! YaY! i am making me some mac and cheese right now and i am about to eat it! YUM! lol.

xoxo becca

Ok...i am back! we didn't kiss or anything (cuz it was church and there was a lot of people around) but we hugged and he had his arm around me...woohoo! did you ever get to see shane?

Woohoo...ya'll kissed...lol! me and will kissed for the first time on friday night inside of a store...lol. i finished my project about two hours ago! yay.

Awww tht cyute! wow tht kinda weird cause i used to know a guy named shane...but its prob not the same person...tht would be kinda weird if it was!!! but yea tht great that you get to hang out together! like i had this bf and i really really liked him...but his parents found out about us goin out so he had to break up with me! but thn like a week l8r he went out with this s-l-u-t! and now he's goin out with someone else!! blah! lol well gtg c/b