Vampire

by Jeremy B   Feb 3, 2007


Bleeding from the outside in
Hallowness filling me within.
A life now downing in sin,
Lost from which I did begin.

Blood now blue as the moon;
A heart ever dying soon.
Mind filled thought of the loon\'.
Alive at mid\', dead now by noon.

As vampires, afraid of light
Only come out amongst the night.
I wish I may, I wish I might
Forever be blinded from you sight.

Driven to action by the Morning Star
Under this control, forgot who I are.
Untamed, bound by no cage or bar.
Kill tonight, and again kill tomarr'.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Animus

    I love poems about vampires.
    I like the accent that it seems to be written in.
    I really enjoyed this one.
    -Animus

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashmore

    Wow! GREAT job. I loved this. Keep on writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by crystal

    Awesome poem man

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa

    Very nice! The only reason im giving you a 4 instead of a 5 is the last stanza kinda killed it for me. Everything was excellent untill the end. I'm sorry if im being critical, but it's just my opinion.