Very nice! The only reason im giving you a 4 instead of a 5 is the last stanza kinda killed it for me. Everything was excellent untill the end. I'm sorry if im being critical, but it's just my opinion.

Awesome poem man

Wow! GREAT job. I loved this. Keep on writing.

I love poems about vampires.
I like the accent that it seems to be written in.
I really enjoyed this one.
-Animus