I liked this a lot, I think a couple more stanzas would really help it seem more complete. but it had a really nice feel to it.

This is really good for how short it is, it has flow and more of a point. I really think that you could expand on this, there are plenty of memories to be added to poems like this. It could turn out really great. But well done for this. =]

Tammie

This is good i hope u dont mind me using it in my senior memory book i have to make my parents. im puting ur name by the poem also. thanx. :P

For someone fresh out of the wood works, I like this, its not Robert Frost, but its simple, and enjoyable. Nicly written. 5/5

Was this poem supposed to rhyme? I couldn't tell because you used 'days' and 'day', which dont rhyme because they are essentially the same word and 'around' and 'about' don't rhyme, either, unless you say it in a funny way.

You should've gone on with the poem. It seems uncomplete, as if you took a saw and cut out middle part. Feels like something is missing from it.

I did enjoy the poem, although, at the end, you could've been more clear on what you meant by 'that's what it's all about'. What's 'it'? Life? Memories? Childhood? I couldn't tell.

Good poem.

ItS fascinatinG..... mE luV yR writingS....

luzaN

I couldn't agree more those memories do grow more precious.well done with this one.

That is definitely what it is all about.. i couldnt have said it any better myself.. you've taken the greatest parts of life and put them all together.. a beautiful poem.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =)

5/5 i really liked this one. it had a nice flow and was easy to read and to understand.

i was nice if it was a little longer though.