She's Changed

I really enjoyed reading this poem a lot because I can relate to it. I was thinking about writing a poem about myself and how I dont like who I've become but you did a great job here.. sometimes things happen in life that change the way we see things or people and we cant help it.. you did an amazing job writing about this and your words really pull the reader into your poem to feel what you are feeling.

amazing job! 5/5 and thanks for the comment!

Wow. this is a very deep poem and i really like it. great job. you're a very diverse writer, which is great. keep up the good work and i can't wait to read more!!! (if you ever need to rant or whatever, message me...i'm totally cool with it)

I love this one because I can relate to it. I know someone like this, and it's weird for me to read something so well written about it. Great job. =]

Your use of the word 'hubby' in the 4th stanza completely threw me off.

I liked the story behind but it honestly just sounds like a rant about an old woman who hates herself and wants to change and isnt going to. I didn't really feel the heartache and pain of the narrator, so it seemed like a boo-hoo story than a 'will you help me' poem.

Use more punctuation. The '~' you used were kinda odd because I've never seen anyone use that in a poem before.

Overall, the poem was decent. It wasn't my favorite but I wouldn't burn it either lol.

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brings tears .. a superb write.. keep it up..
i sensed mixed emotions.. brilliant work

~Wake~