by Deana
I can remember feeling this exact same way, Women can have lots of reasons for these emotional ups and downs ,don`t be afraid to seek help. great poem, thank you for the comments on mine. |
by Emma
Nice job=) 5/5 |
by Wake
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by Synh
Your use of the word 'hubby' in the 4th stanza completely threw me off. |
by Katie
I love this one because I can relate to it. I know someone like this, and it's weird for me to read something so well written about it. Great job. =] |
by Beautifully Nothing
Wow. this is a very deep poem and i really like it. great job. you're a very diverse writer, which is great. keep up the good work and i can't wait to read more!!! (if you ever need to rant or whatever, message me...i'm totally cool with it) |
by Live WeLL
I really enjoyed reading this poem a lot because I can relate to it. I was thinking about writing a poem about myself and how I dont like who I've become but you did a great job here.. sometimes things happen in life that change the way we see things or people and we cant help it.. you did an amazing job writing about this and your words really pull the reader into your poem to feel what you are feeling. |