I'll Be There

by P.oemless   Feb 3, 2007


Why can't you see
how much I yearn to be with you?
Are you oblivious
to the flirtations and stares?
I know you think you love her
but I can assure you that you don't.
Be with me, and you'll find
what it is that you've been seeking.

You think she's beautiful, funny,
and a great person to be with.
Let me reveal to you
all the pain behind her pretty face.
She's a liar, a deciever;
she let's her insecurities effect everyone around her.
To her nothing is a secret
She is vile and unworthy of your charm.

So, darling please solve the mystery that my love seems to be.
Is it that convoluted?
The part of me I'm showing you?
She's crushed your heart,
but soon you will overcome this anguish.
And when you need a shoulder to cry on,
I'll be there

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  • 17 years ago

    by homebound

    Wow, I didnt down-vote and I am sorry, I was already having an off day and it kind of helped when you called my poems melodratmatic. It looked like you down-voted mine though, but from what you said, i believe you didnt! I am sorry!

  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    This is a really cute idea and if its true then apparently someone has stolen your heart. :D and hey thats great fuel to writting poems!! :D but you need to break up your lines differently. and get into the habbit of trying to find syllables because they really help the flow.

    but keep it up. um sure you'll get better. it takes time :D

    good luck with it hun. i hope something sparks that thing inside that will allow poetry flow out of you with out trying.

  • 17 years ago

    by AwakeInDreamin

    Very passionate. you obviously put your heart into it. i enjoyed this poem keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow, that is... amazing
    i can relate to it so well
    I can't wait to read more

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