You know what i am going to say. Great!

I luved this poem coz its kinda sumthin u can get lost in. gr8 job!

"Calm and mellow outside,
While demons torment within."

This was my fave part of the poem. I liked how you worded this poem. Sometimes I feel like that...you know, hiding my feelings until they build up and burst. I thought this poem was really well written.

Astryd