Murder, I Wrote

by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child   Feb 3, 2007


"Murder," I wrote
On the walls of my heart
Just a small note
Before I depart

"Love," i erased
Though once i beleived
Now the soul lays digraced
Heart easily decieved

"Sorry," my eyes read
In the silence of death
As a new wound bled
A burden to breath

"Rape," i spoke
To cast of denial
Tears started to choke
And forbid a fake smile

"Theif," i recorded
On the notion of you
I stand unrewarded
But remember what's due

"Liar," lips whispered
To love's eager ear
Another 4-letter word
i wish not to hear

"Mistake," I engraved
On the pale, bruised flesh
Where no one forgave
The SINS of the flesh

"Murder," I wrote
On the walls of my heart
Just a small note
Before I depart

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    Everyone has murder in there heart whether it be by someone they had a relationship with or a loss I no i have.

  • 16 years ago

    by jane

    "Love," i erased
    Though once i beleived

    love this part and i totally get it....really good

  • 16 years ago

    by Fiend in the Iron Maiden

    ...wow, that gave me cold chills, dam that was good ^.^

    :WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GO YOU:

    xd

    keep up the great work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Chemistry

    Woooowww...... As soon as I read the first two stanzas, I decided that after I finish the whole poem it's going straight to my favorites! It's beautiful, great job...

  • 17 years ago

    by Katie

    Holy... wow. This might be my favorite so far on this site, no joke. You're freakin' skilled. I absolutely love this poem. Sooo powerful. Awesome job.

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