Unintentional Pain

by P.oemless   Feb 3, 2007


I don't love you
never have, never will.
If you comprehend that,
with me what hole are you trying to fill?
Why do you keep trying;
when you know all you'll hear from me is sighing?

I didn't notice you much.
When we used to laugh and joke I just thought you were having fun.
It was harmless.
I thought our friendship had just begun.
How did everyone else notice your love while I was blind?
I didn't interpret any of the signs.

I'm sorry I've caused you pain.
It was unintentional.
Maybe someday you'll forgive me again
I genuinely hope you will.
There are many other fish in the Sea
I pray that you agree.

Ugh... Why did I even try to rhyme it?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    I liked this. It has originality, since most poems are written from the opposite point of view. Some rhymes were forced a little, but overall it was a great read. 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    Uhm i really like the idea of this poem but to me it seems more of a really short story full of questions rather then a poem telling a story alreadly lived or written. uhm i see where the rhym is but its a little off. a lot of it is forced. but dont think its bad i just think you need to edit it some and keep trying. may i suggest a rhyming website. you can find them on goodle by typing in 'rhyming words' or a theasorous.. its a great tool.

    keep trying though it'll get better i promis.

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