by King Of Contradiction Feb 3, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Hi, I'm just a boy about 16, |
by JustKristina
Great work! i loved how it kinda built off of eachother and the end was like "BAM!!!" haha i loved it! keep up the great work! :o] |
by Aure
A slow start but woow I just love the ending, you saved all up all your emotion and let it come down at the end like a bomb, great work of what's to become a great poet without doubt |
The last 4 lines are my favorites. |
WOW.... that was good 5/5 |