by The DaveJon Feb 4, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Silent tears falling |
by kimara4955
Now that is apsolutelly brilliant, especially the repatition praying begging dying. you are an amzing writer i wish i could write as deep as you. xxtake carexx |
by Dark Demise
Wow, Great flow, very deep writeing, Great job! |
by Adriana
Strange....yet cute in a way!!! loving it!!!!!!!!!!!5/5 |
Whoa! Amazing Poem! i can tell you have deep emotions and serious talents! i really enjoyed reading this poem! I loved the way the imagery was right there it was so discribtive and beautiful in a many ways. good work keep it up!! |