Whoa! Amazing Poem! i can tell you have deep emotions and serious talents! i really enjoyed reading this poem! I loved the way the imagery was right there it was so discribtive and beautiful in a many ways. good work keep it up!!

Strange....yet cute in a way!!! loving it!!!!!!!!!!!5/5

Wow, Great flow, very deep writeing, Great job!

Now that is apsolutelly brilliant, especially the repatition praying begging dying. you are an amzing writer i wish i could write as deep as you. xxtake carexx