Knife

by Joe   Feb 4, 2007


You love me when your sober
You hurt me when your not
You screm, yell, and beat me although we haven't fought.

My love for you grows each day
while your love for me fades away.
The pain that you have put me through, is over powered bye the love I still feel for you.
But then I wake up, and it all comes back, what had happend before my world wen't black.
I see the knife and I know what to do,
soon we shall see who is the true fool.
Our time is up I am sorry to do this to you.
up goes the knife and down goes the tears,
I shall not suffer any more years.
As the knife hits it's target and the pain goes away,
you realize this is not just a play.
The world still goes on and so does your life,
Just remember mine ended with a knife.

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  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    Wow this poem was amazing it had a suprise ending that was wonderful it was beautifully written and i loved it great job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ImmortalKitty

    Wow really nice...I would recomend working on your sentence structure other then that it is awesome

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