Too late

by AwakeInDreamin   Feb 4, 2007


The feeling of a blade cutting acoss your skin
the strike of pain embracing your nerves and traveling up your arm
the cries and screams that race around you
the arms around you telling tou not to do it
but its too late you have already made the first cut
you are surrounded by tears and screams
but its still to late everyone starts to look down on you
now you are alone and no one cares about your lost soul and broken heart.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so very sad, I have tears in my eyes...I can defintely relate to this.
    Beautiful work on such a sad topic.

  • 17 years ago

    by halfwaytoinvisible

    This was sad. but loved it.
    keep up the work~

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Aww that is so sad jess. and thanks hun. ya she means a lot to me and i would be lost without her support. you will meet her one day:P

    xx.chelsea.xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a sad and lonely place to be. This brought tears to my eyes. Take Care Cindy

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