That must have taken alot to write that

Really nice piece. I enjoyed reading this, though I did find one tiny mistake, "everything i was stood for is gone", "was" shouldn't be there. Overall it was a good read. 5/5

Marcella

Like it, some parts seemed alittle forced, but it flows well in other parts, great imagrey, good job

omen

Wow. I'm just hoping that wasn't true. Some guys, just so pathetic and stupid. I don't see why they have to do things like that.
"i have no goals in life anymore."---> i don't think it flowed too well in there.

Your words moved me I felt like crying when I was done I just felt horrible I mean it's good because you made me feel your pain nice job

This is too sad, you show your emotion so well, it was beautiful, but i don't think it flowed as well as your others,
luv gabriella

Aw. This was very very sad. But full of emotion. The flow was a bit off at times , but was pretty nice. I can feel your pain. It's horrible that men do this. It's a sick sick world out there. ;[

Beautifully penned, though.

Bri [x]

I think this would have gone under a better section. however, this was again nicely written. and as for evidence, they'd have to use your body...[inserts the explanation].

great job.

and ive read your other poem and i have no intentions of saying stay strong. butttt...
I'm going to say...
He is not to ever get in your way. You can still try living your life to the fullest. Accept life as it has been given to you, there was a reason...even if you don't know what it is, and even if you'll never know. There is a purpose. And I'm sure this rapist is dying in a way no one can tell.

Hey, I can really relate to you here. We shared very similar emotions. Awesome job, be proud of yourself for letting it out.
Greta

First Stanza:
- I ** [Second and Third line]
-(,) [End of First, Second, and Third]
-(.) [End of Fourth line]

Second Stanza:
-L** [End of first line.]
- Right doesn't quite sound very good, but it fits, eh. :/
- (,) [End of First, Second, and third line.]
-Down two times? One after another at that? Take out down in the third line, or change second, maybe?
-(.) [End of Fourth line]

Third Stanza:
- Captialize; My, I, and I.
- (,) [End of First, Second, and Third.]
- Everything I once believed in I've lost ** ?
(.) End of last line.

Fourth Stanza:

-Capitalize- In[Firstline], I.
- (,) [End of First, Second, And third.]
- (.) End of Last line.

Fifth Stanza:
-Isn't**
- (,) end of first second and third.
-(.) end of last.

Sixth Stanza: .
-Capitalize He's, and I.
- (,) End of first and second.
(;) End of third.
(.) end of fourth.

Seventh Stanza:
-Capitalize And, and I.
-(,) After first, second and third.
- it's**
-(.) end of last.

Eight stanza:
- (,) After second and third.
-I believe 'than' should be then. but, I'm not 100% positive.
(.) end of last.

- - - -
Quite a sad poem.
I could feel the emotion, and the pain. I know the feeling, it's horrible. But, life goes on.. I'm sure you know that, too. Things happen and things change; I believe all for the better. At least in my life.
Amazing poem.
4/5

Wow! 5/5