Ooh, wow. Those are the words that were in my head after I read this. It's short, but it is REALLY good. I like it a lot. Makes me think of happy things. And Sweet Dreams...ha ha. Sorry, bad pun. Take care.
> kiesha

Short and sweet! I must that's usually my favorite. sometimes a poem doesn't need to be a full length novel lol. this was a really cute and well written poem. 5/5

marcella

A very tranquil and flawless write. It's simplicity is what makes it so amazing and meaningful. Keep up your great work! 5/5

I enjoyed this, it was simple yet beautiful. 5/5

I relaly like the first line. its really good. and the title is good as well. but its seems like its missing something. idk what or where its missing from it just seems incomplete... maybe after me telling you this you can figure it out. but great job.

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Veyr short yet a wonderful read. There was so much emotion, making the poem so very meaningful behind these words. I have to say i disliked the fact you started the poem with "And..", i dont know maybe thats just me. I think you should of used better punctuation through this though. You ended all of them with a commar and i think if you used enjambment or somethign similar it would of made this poem so much more better. Just my oppinion thought, keep writing! xx

Huh. This is very interesting as well. I really like the way you think.
This is short, but very good. I'm baffled at what to say, just keep it up, whatever you're doing. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

That was really sweet....short and sweet to be exact haha....really good....5/5...comment back!?

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love it