Loosing Mom

by Erin   Feb 4, 2007


A part of me missing
the cheek, I'd never be kissing
The 3 words I could never say
Why did the angels have to take you away?
Gone from this earth
You had so much potential, So much worth
I am now the only girl
Alone, forced to face this big world
Your accomplishments had no end
My heart aches losing my "best friend"
Beat by a cancerous disease
I begged him to let you live,even got down on my knees
The physical you has left, leaving me with the smile you once had
It warms my heart to see you once so glad
I've grown beautifully, no need to sob
I've made all the right choices, Mom you did your job
You made me the woman I am today
No need to worry I'm doing more then O.K.
They took you away to a world beyond the cloud
How can GOD let this much pain be allowed?
I'll try and accept, but everyday it's harder still
Just don't forget that I love you, forever and always will

* to my mom who passed away how i truly miss her n hope to see her one day*

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  • 15 years ago

    by ChloeLauren

    This is fantastic! im sorri for your loss but i no that wont heal anythin. trust me i no. but anyway fantastic writing! absolutley fab!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kersten

    Truely amazing! I love it... I just lost my mother about 4 months ago and I know how hard it is.. But I also know that she wouldn't want me to stay unhappy, I'm sorry to hear about your mother best wishes for you and god bless
    ~Kersten Harmic

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Erin,

    You made me cry, dear girl...
    Once, a long, long time ago my mother became very ill and she had no less than 7 kilogramms of tumors in her stomach. They could not tell if it was cancer or not. She went into surgery, not knowing if she would ever open her eyes again.. Hours later we got the message it was not cancer and the tumor had been removed. She was a mere shell of herself and although she lived through it all, her condition remained weaak for over a year. I was very young when this happened and I can feel every inch of your pain. To lose your mum, or even the thought of losing her is just too much on a young girls mind.
    I feel so sorry for your loss.
    May God bless you and always keep you safe.

    *hugs you*

    Ingrid 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cara

    I realli like it. i can sort of relate to a point, as my mum is very sick. i realli like how u did this one.
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by EmOToMbOy13

    Omg, i am sorry about your mom. i know how you feel...since i lost my dad, few months ago. and i like your poem!

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