Wow, great poem. great rhyming, Good job =D way better then what I ever wrote at 13, very sad poem, 5/5!

I really love this poem, I think you should also post that one poem that u were doing for school, =)
this poem is so sad,

Wow this poem is great.....its better than I could ever write....you are great with rhyming.......you could go far with your poetry.messege me sometime if you want.this poem is wonderful!
~Jessica Lillian

This is wonderful... ur rele good.... very sad=(

Omg, i am sorry about your mom. i know how you feel...since i lost my dad, few months ago. and i like your poem!

I realli like it. i can sort of relate to a point, as my mum is very sick. i realli like how u did this one.
xx

Erin,

You made me cry, dear girl...
Once, a long, long time ago my mother became very ill and she had no less than 7 kilogramms of tumors in her stomach. They could not tell if it was cancer or not. She went into surgery, not knowing if she would ever open her eyes again.. Hours later we got the message it was not cancer and the tumor had been removed. She was a mere shell of herself and although she lived through it all, her condition remained weaak for over a year. I was very young when this happened and I can feel every inch of your pain. To lose your mum, or even the thought of losing her is just too much on a young girls mind.
I feel so sorry for your loss.
May God bless you and always keep you safe.

*hugs you*

Ingrid 5/5

Truely amazing! I love it... I just lost my mother about 4 months ago and I know how hard it is.. But I also know that she wouldn't want me to stay unhappy, I'm sorry to hear about your mother best wishes for you and god bless
~Kersten Harmic

This is fantastic! im sorri for your loss but i no that wont heal anythin. trust me i no. but anyway fantastic writing! absolutley fab!