Very sweet poem, I loved how you showed it from a male perspective as opposed to the typical female perspective, that was very heartfelt. Great job!

"He felt a feeling so different
When he became a man
Holding his baby so small and sweet
Rubbing her little hands"

those lines are so cute^^
I love this poem.
You did a GREAT job.
5/5

~Chelsea

Great choice in a topic, it shows a vibrant detail of emotions. I would add commas and periods to the end of the lines so the reader knows where to pause, and it will improve the flow.

{5/5}

[Pygmypuff]

Awwww this is sooo sweet! i love it!!

xo kisses xo