by Ashley Ann Feb 4, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
love is
Love is found in different forms. |
Hey, |
by PygmyPuff
Im not sure I understand the structure. |
This poem is sweet. |
Wow, I really enjoyed this poem, the imagery was new and fresh and the concept was just beautiful. Only thing I would say is to just that I enjoyed it from the fourth line in and didn't see the first part as necessary. Of course that is quite subjective and the piece would work well either way! |