My Gun (Is that alright with you?)

by Weeping Wolf   Feb 4, 2007


Give My Gun To You (Is that alright with you?)

Sweep me away with the waste
when all I see is your face
even with somebody new
this is the wrong place
to be thinking of you.

He takes my hand and we fly
Fly as fast as we can from you
But though I'm staring at him
All I can see in my mind is you.

Looking back...there you are...I think...

Give my gun to you when its loaded
Well what if I do?
Give my gun to you when its loaded
Is that alright with you?
Give my gun to you when its loaded
Then what will you do?

The dizzy lights set my soul to flame
I think and wonder who it was to blame
Remembering the very last time you came
Was it tears of sorrow? or tears of shame?

Give my gun to you when its loaded
Well what if I do?
Give my gun to you when its cocked
Id that alright with you?
Give my gun to you when its pulled
Then what will you do?
Give my gun to you...would you shoot it?

Gazing to the savior in the sky
There's no more hero in my life
Running out of light, out of time
But I am strong under the moonshine!

Point my gun at you when its loaded
Well what if I do?
Point my gun at you when its cocked
Is that alright with you?
Point my gun at you then shoot it...
Then what would you do?

If I had such a chance in a lifetime
Would it be such a terrible crime?
Would I throw it away or point it?
What happens when it's loaded?

Lead me away from this place
Because...because...
This is not what I would do.
Everything you did to me
I would never do to you.
...is that alright with you?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Aure

    Don't try to hold on to the original lines to much, although the last parts were perfect, the first weren't that much. I think the flow would be better if you made it giving, pointing... my gun, but tell me if I'm wrong
    (English is my second language so it could be that my feeling is completely wrong)
    It's very well written, some workpoints like in every poem but deffinitly above average, I see a great poet in you.
    (Also one of my favourite songs, probably that's why I'm acting a bit like a critic)

  • 17 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This was very well written
    I enjoyed it and it looks like you spent quite some time writting it!
    =-)
    Great work
    5/5

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