by Cella Bella
I just read a poem that kinda had the same idea as this. I don't like the topic. But you wrote it very well. 5/5 |
Wow.. um.. okay so this is sad and disturbing i hope you dont really cut yourself.. it a horrible thing.. however.. this is a really great poem.. very descriptive which is always a plus.. so great job 5/5! definitly! |
by LadyPearl
Good job, very disturbing and strong images and emotions. The first and last stanza had the same flow. The middle stanzas kind of got off. Keep it up |
Wow amazing |
I can relate its sad wat ppl do even tho i do that but i haven't done dat in alwhile i hate da scars but yea good poem 5/5 |
Wow this is such a sad poem. I hope that you really don't cut yourself. If you do then I'm very sorry to hear it. I know that it might seem like its helping you now but its only numbing the pain and it will get worse later. I hope that you can get some help. But nice work on the poem. |
.. this was a really great poem... you really expressed your self well.. and i think it was really real.. nice job |
by ibleedregret
I absoulty love this poem. |
It's so true to life, quite graffic but in a good way. People need to know the truth right? It's amazing. I've added you to my favourites. |
by Lauren
Such a sad poem but i generally like sad kind of poems so it was i thought it was good. I hope things get betta 4 u. |
by angelina
Really good and i can relate ... the emotion and pain was felt through the words you used ... you really stated your mind and what you thought |
by Lovemylove
Very emotional I like it. |
♥I really like it I relate to it alot♥ |
Many have felt this way, and I hope you can learn not to rely on your razorblade anymore. Good poem. |
by firexdancer
Wow this is so cool, how it's like the razor is a friend, to be protected by! |
by KemistryKia
So so sad, very depressing, Good Job (lol) it was so scray and almost dark, but i was very drawn to it. keep doing what you do |
by Espoirfailed
This is dark and twisted, but an excellent poem. i loved the honesty and bluntess of it, well done |
by sarah
Great poem! i liked dis 1, :) |
by UnToLd TrUtH
This is very good. I loved the descriptions you put in. 5/5 |
by lillie
Wow this poem is full of emotion pretty cool peom. :D |