Comments : Razor Blade

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    I just read a poem that kinda had the same idea as this. I don't like the topic. But you wrote it very well. 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. um.. okay so this is sad and disturbing i hope you dont really cut yourself.. it a horrible thing.. however.. this is a really great poem.. very descriptive which is always a plus.. so great job 5/5! definitly!

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Good job, very disturbing and strong images and emotions. The first and last stanza had the same flow. The middle stanzas kind of got off. Keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Katieandkatrina

    Wow amazing

  • 17 years ago

    by lost in lovee

    I can relate its sad wat ppl do even tho i do that but i haven't done dat in alwhile i hate da scars but yea good poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow this is such a sad poem. I hope that you really don't cut yourself. If you do then I'm very sorry to hear it. I know that it might seem like its helping you now but its only numbing the pain and it will get worse later. I hope that you can get some help. But nice work on the poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by keep breathing

    .. this was a really great poem... you really expressed your self well.. and i think it was really real.. nice job
    *Rach

  • 17 years ago

    by ibleedregret

    I absoulty love this poem.
    its funny how us as "cutters" can relate to others poems ahy?. my blade is my best friend. if u think about it, its the only friend that would never backstab u (no pun intened), nwver take ur bf lol. read my poems. i hope u can relate to them. make a comment. thanx loved it
    jessie xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    It's so true to life, quite graffic but in a good way. People need to know the truth right? It's amazing. I've added you to my favourites.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren

    Such a sad poem but i generally like sad kind of poems so it was i thought it was good. I hope things get betta 4 u.

  • 17 years ago

    by angelina

    Really good and i can relate ... the emotion and pain was felt through the words you used ... you really stated your mind and what you thought

  • 17 years ago

    by Lovemylove

    Very emotional I like it.

  • 17 years ago

    by CupidsBlackRose

    ♥I really like it I relate to it alot♥

  • 17 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    Many have felt this way, and I hope you can learn not to rely on your razorblade anymore. Good poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Wow this is so cool, how it's like the razor is a friend, to be protected by!
    i luvd it!
    thx for the comment!
    luv gabriella

  • 17 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    So so sad, very depressing, Good Job (lol) it was so scray and almost dark, but i was very drawn to it. keep doing what you do

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    This is dark and twisted, but an excellent poem. i loved the honesty and bluntess of it, well done

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah

    Great poem! i liked dis 1, :)

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    This is very good. I loved the descriptions you put in. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by lillie

    Wow this poem is full of emotion pretty cool peom. :D
    You can check out my poems if you'd like :)