This is so sad... It's sad how many people blame themselves for a break up when in reality it was the other person to blame... This was very well written, I could feel your pain whilst reading this... Another wonderful job by You 5/5 xx

This was so beautiful..
A sad subject but you managed to write this piece wonderfully.
I enjoyed the first and last stanza most, I thought they were both very powerful.
Again, wonderful work.