This was a very good peice!
Great job
I enjoyed this poem
5/5

=-)

The sky without stars......Mhm...Yeah I can imagine that since here in U.A.E you can hardly see the stars because all the city light..It's irritating especially since I'm in love with stars.
This is a great piece..I added you to my favorites I hope thats ok
xx Roxy

Great piece of poetry!
very enjoyable :)
and deserves if i could put 6/5 i would ;) but 5/5 will have to do for now :)!