Trapped Within Life (Acrostic)

by BECCA lessTHANthree   Feb 4, 2007


Trapped within life
Retreat to the unknown
Allowing no one in
Pleading to be shown
Praying endlessly
Entangled in her own
Deadly ways

Waiting for a turnaround
Intrigued by all the woe
Tucked inside existence
Hoping to end sorrow
Into this world of hers
Not a soul, no God will go

Lifeless and strung out
In here for one too many days
Forever she is trapped in life
Entangled in her deadly ways

*****an acrostic poem uses the letters in a topic word
(usually the title) to begin each line. all lines of the poem should relate to or describe the topic word

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  • 5 years ago

    by Ava Marie DeSouza

    ????????

    this is some pro work ?

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    You did a GREAT job. Now, I seen the title of the poem, but I didn't even realize it was acrostic until I read the very bottom. It was the perfect acrostic poem.

    You did a great job! I loved it. :D
    <3Teria.

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    For a 1 yr old you write hell good poems.

    Acrostics are hard to keep good flow of rhythm and are hard to end.

    you did this quite perfectly

    5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Wow, this is great! You deffinitley mastered it! I loved it. & really enjoyed reading it.

    It was so unique & creative.

    Though, I wasn't too fond of this line:

    Not a soul, no God will go

    Just kinda messed up the flow to me.

    Great job.

    Keep it up.

    Bri.x

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    This is a good poem it as deep and heartfelt i liked it 5/5

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