I am not a big fn of acrostics because they don't sound as good, but this one was well written. however someof it doesnt flow. for example, "Entangled in her own,
Deadly ways." To get to "deadly ways" there is this swoop when i read it. doesn't flow as nicely, and it doesn't match the way the last line was written.
On a lighter note, i love the wording. its very descriptive and strong. keep up the work. 5/5.

Strange...............yet cute in a way...5/5

I like this poem. a lot. i like the last line. entangled in her own deadly ways. idk why but i just love the way iyt sounds. but i dont think that the last two lines of the first stanza flow. but other then that. great job!

This was very different. i liked the flow & your word choice was good considering you did not have much to chose from with your topic for the acrostic poem.

great job. 5/5

I know how hard it is to write an acrostic, cause I just wrote one a few days ago lol. But, I think you did this really well. You used a great choice in words and even though the end of the first stanza didn't flow so nicely, it didn't take away from it at all. Great read! 5/5

marcella

Unusual, but I liked it. Very nice piece! It had a neat flow about it and a dark side to it. Nice job!
Charisma*

Wow that was neat. I like that it is something different i havent really seen before. Sweet lol, i jist had to read it a couple of times to really understand it. after that it seemed to flow nicely together. I like the rhyming. But it just seemed like your stanzas didnt really go together. Like they are different poems all together or something. But I cannot really judge when I am not familiar with this particular writing stype. Btw thanks for the comment!

~skittz

Another great poem keep it up!!!!!!!!!!

I did not like this so much. The flow was very very iffy and it just didn't ever click.

I like the choice of words though.

This Acrostic has a bonus rhyme scheme with a revealing soul searching theme that blends well with the feelings spelled out

Not a soul, no God will go
[[That lined seemed a {little} awkward]]

This was amazing. One of your best, I'd say. Acrostics are hard to write, but you seem to have it mastered. Nicely done.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

Another good poem, i love acrostic poems, they are my fav style, and you did perfect on this one, i give it a 5/5!!!

Another good poem, i love acrostic poems, they are my fav style, and you did perfect on this one, i give it a 5/5!!!

Acrostic can be difficult to write because of the starting letter resrtiction, but this was a good attempt.
It was a somewhat common subject, yet the language use was better.
The flow was ok, but could maybe be improved at the end of the first stanza.
Thanks for sharing.

Wow, that was great! I really enjoyed that poem, it was very creative the way you made it into an Acrostic.

This is a good poem it as deep and heartfelt i liked it 5/5

Wow, this is great! You deffinitley mastered it! I loved it. & really enjoyed reading it.

It was so unique & creative.

Though, I wasn't too fond of this line:

Not a soul, no God will go

Just kinda messed up the flow to me.

Great job.

Keep it up.

Bri.x

For a 1 yr old you write hell good poems.

Acrostics are hard to keep good flow of rhythm and are hard to end.

you did this quite perfectly

5.5

You did a GREAT job. Now, I seen the title of the poem, but I didn't even realize it was acrostic until I read the very bottom. It was the perfect acrostic poem.

You did a great job! I loved it. :D
<3Teria.

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this is some pro work ?