by Nada Feb 4, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
You say you want to die |
That was INCREDIBLE dude i should show this to the suicidal people in my school... |
Breath taking. It was really caring and heart filled. Its got a great grip on suicide and the effect on the family. |
Breath taking. It was really caring and heart filled. Its got a great grip on suicide and the effect on the family. |
Wow...i dont know what it was but in the middle of your poem i got this sudden chill that went through my body. im like speachless...freestyle isnt really my style but this was just so breathtaking, i mean i cant not give you a 5 for this...i loved how instead of the usual ill go cut myself now you went in another direction with the same topic...makes me want to try that .... i guess there are so many of these cutting poems cause they have lots of sorrow and can be all sad and stuff, and i dont know, i guess they come easier...but w.e/...this was AMAZINGGG..the flow of your words, although it didnt rhyme felt lyrical...:).keep it upp |
by Tara Kay
I liked it. |