Go And Commit Suicide =)

by Nada   Feb 4, 2007


You say you want to die
Go ahead and end your life
You dream about shooting a bullet through your head
Well thats good,
At least you will forget the people who love you
You talk about pushing a blade in your heart
Okay thats a way to stop loving the people who care about you
Dont worry ill tell your dad that you loved him
So he does not have to work his ass for you so u can go to college
Maybe he will get a heart attack so he can wave to you from heaven
Dont worry ill tell your mom that you loved her
So she does not have to wake you up in the morning for school and make you breakfast
Nor clean the house, do the shopping and feed you so u can grow and prosper
Dont worry ill tell your siblings that you loved them
That you werent trying to set a bad example
So there is hope in life for them
Dont worry ill tell your whole family that you loved them
But unfortunately all their support was wasted
Dont worry ill tell your friends that you loved them
And they shouldnt cry cause your happy
Your happy to be dead
Happy to end your future
Happy not to be a beautiful loving mother
Happy not to be a hardworking caring father
Happy not to experience the joy in life
Not to breathe fresh air
Not to party with friends
Not to meet your true love
And say he is the one thatll never leave me
And he is the one that will make me forget about others
And that I went through hell to find him but I still found him
Go end your life
Go to hell
Cause I know if your family wont forgive you
God never will

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxdOnTbReAkMyHeArtxx

    That was INCREDIBLE dude i should show this to the suicidal people in my school...

    10000000/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ShadowedEyesLie

    Breath taking. It was really caring and heart filled. Its got a great grip on suicide and the effect on the family.

  • 17 years ago

    by ShadowedEyesLie

    Breath taking. It was really caring and heart filled. Its got a great grip on suicide and the effect on the family.

  • 17 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Wow...i dont know what it was but in the middle of your poem i got this sudden chill that went through my body. im like speachless...freestyle isnt really my style but this was just so breathtaking, i mean i cant not give you a 5 for this...i loved how instead of the usual ill go cut myself now you went in another direction with the same topic...makes me want to try that .... i guess there are so many of these cutting poems cause they have lots of sorrow and can be all sad and stuff, and i dont know, i guess they come easier...but w.e/...this was AMAZINGGG..the flow of your words, although it didnt rhyme felt lyrical...:).keep it upp

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I liked it.
    I expected it to be so like other poems but it was unique in its own way.
    the title was good,
    it flowed okay, bits i felt were a little forced but overall it was very good.
    love Tara-Kay