I didn't get this part, it probably had some error in it: "And that I went through hell to find him but I still found him"

and I loved this poem. This is where I will be if my friend attempts the "emo stage" again. I got tired of showing smypathy and that crap. I'm on the edge and will use reverse psycology. And this poem reminded of that. yea. some people need to think. people do freakin care about the one who wants to die. they dont realize that there is someone in life that actually care about you. you may not see it now, but as soon as you continue with it, and stay strong youll find the one or ONES that care. i think that those who commit suicide are really selffish. =] 5/5.

Wow i really liked this poem...it's definitely true ppl do care but others r too blind and caught up in themselves to realize it definitely 5/5 keep it up
x!x

What i mean by i went through hell to find him but i still found him means you knoe how like theres all these corrupt relationships and that u never want to fall in love again nd ur too scared, well im sayin keep tryin because when u do find ur true love, ull be relieved and appreciate him more

I really like this poem i think sayin that ppl care for them makes them realize that they r loved but sometimes it doesnt wrk but atleast it wrth a try

I liked this poem and it has brought me to tears because it reminded me of someone. it was so effective, well done.
however in response to ppl that say suicide is selfish, that is so easy to say but wen u honestly feel like u cant live it is different n i hope they never hav to experience ne1 they no in that situation b/c then its not so easy to say its selfish.

Thank you sweeti, and you are right, suicide is not being selfish, i think its just being blind

I'll call suicide selfish because i have been there myself- and have known far to many that succeded. the poem was excellent. so honest. i felt anger and despiration. great read. awesome job! 5 for you

Thank you, i appreciate ur opinion

I really liked this poem...sometimes its things like this that i need 2 say 2 my friends if they talk about suicide.. good job!

This is one of the mosy inspiring poems and i know it wuld've helped me abit when iwas going thro tht stuff.

Im glad you liked it, spread the message =)

I liked it.
I expected it to be so like other poems but it was unique in its own way.
the title was good,
it flowed okay, bits i felt were a little forced but overall it was very good.
love Tara-Kay

Wow...i dont know what it was but in the middle of your poem i got this sudden chill that went through my body. im like speachless...freestyle isnt really my style but this was just so breathtaking, i mean i cant not give you a 5 for this...i loved how instead of the usual ill go cut myself now you went in another direction with the same topic...makes me want to try that .... i guess there are so many of these cutting poems cause they have lots of sorrow and can be all sad and stuff, and i dont know, i guess they come easier...but w.e/...this was AMAZINGGG..the flow of your words, although it didnt rhyme felt lyrical...:).keep it upp

Breath taking. It was really caring and heart filled. Its got a great grip on suicide and the effect on the family.

Breath taking. It was really caring and heart filled. Its got a great grip on suicide and the effect on the family.

That was INCREDIBLE dude i should show this to the suicidal people in my school...

10000000/5