by AnorexicDream Feb 4, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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Lyla can't finish her food. |
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Good work |
by MiaFairy
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Omg omg really good. it reminds me of that song Sophie by Eleanor Mcevoy. |
by ForeverYoung
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Wow, really great poem... reminds me of a song called Sophie... i think you may have based this poem on those lyrics? |
by Dacey Flame
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I like this poem a lot. The flow isn't quite perfect, and the rhymes are simple, but it's a good message and I think you got it across pretty greatly =) |
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Its an amzingly good poem. |