Wow..i like that poem..its strange...but also cute in a way! is it about anyone ya know???well anyways loving it!!! great work!!!5/5

Hey! mi name is amanda i also have a problem with my weight dont do labels so i don't call myself anorexic...i've been in therapy for cutting for 3 years now....i'm only 15...nice poem though...

Its an amzingly good poem.
and when i read it.
lets just it reminded me of a lot.

I like this poem a lot. The flow isn't quite perfect, and the rhymes are simple, but it's a good message and I think you got it across pretty greatly =)

Wow, really great poem... reminds me of a song called Sophie... i think you may have based this poem on those lyrics?
well its really well written and structured anyways... so well done 5/5

steph

Omg omg really good. it reminds me of that song Sophie by Eleanor Mcevoy.

Good work