On a ride

by Veronica   Feb 4, 2007


U extended out ur hand and ask me to go on a ride
on a ride to the brightest star
on a ride to prettiest star

i grabbed ur had and played along
went on a ride to the brightest star
on a ride to the prettiest star

there, it shine so bright
illuminating our heart

under the stars
face to face
eyes to eyes
mouth to mouth

a kiss

so pure and soft

an

i love u

so graceful and warm

a

hug

so passionet and hot

a

touch

so gentle and slow

a

goodbye

so caring and lovely

then..

u hold me tight and dropped me off

back

on my bed

where ill dream

every night

with a ride

to the

prettiest star

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  • 17 years ago

    by Dan

    Nice poem all the spacin kinda pissed me off though lol but anyways this is a good poem i would have gave a 5/5 but it wasnt like BAM lol but still very nice and keep writin i added u as a fav

  • 17 years ago

    by xoxoRoseyxoxo

    Cool poem but add more effects