by Never URs Feb 4, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
You talked to me, |
by homebound
Hey Lina...jw was this one about 7? great job! by the way i think im going to start a new name and delete all the poems ive written! |
by P.oemless
I agree with shawn. Be more precise, but still a GREAT poem! |
by shawn
This was a good poem, but i feel there are words you could have used in this poem to make it seem a bit more emotionally convincing, but still good. |